Alone a Raindrop, Together a Cloud
Word Count: 49 Alone, I am a small sprinkle. Together, we are united water. Eeek, I can’t hold it! I drip-drop… DOWN, DOWN, DOWN. Alone, I am a barely-there plop. Together, we are a happy puddle. SPLISH, SPLASH, SQUISH! Ahhh, the sun! I evaporate… UP, UP, UP. Together, a cloud once again.
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3/1/2021 04:43:41 pm
Love this! I can imagine the illustrations! 🌦☂️🌈 Great job!
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Charlotte Dixon
3/3/2021 11:09:57 am
This is visual and the sound effects had me in the day! Well done! Good luck!
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3/8/2021 08:49:14 pm
I love how you used a STEM topic to share a story about togetherness, it's so sweet. Wish you the best in the contest!
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